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Too Fast

Too Fast Commuters on a train Going to work every day Too fast the tracks say As they wobble and stray They cause the train to sway Too fast the tracks say As they scream out and say As the brakes start to fail Too fast the tracks say As the train goes off the rail As the trains bursts into flame Too fast the tracks say As the train fills with smoke As they all start to choke Too fast the tracks say As the conductor wakes up A little too late Too fast the tracks say Commuters all dead I warned you I said Too Fast

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Date: 2/4/2018 11:50:00 AM
DAmning end.. Well written, guess its dangerous to move too fast in life..
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 2/21/2018 8:12:00 PM
Thank you..I tried moving too fast..mmm don't want to do that again :))
Date: 2/4/2018 12:32:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, Patricia. Well done.
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Patricia Leduc
Date: 2/4/2018 12:56:00 AM
Thank you so much!!

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