Patricia Leduc Poet Verse

Too Fast

Too Fast

Commuters on a train
Going to work every day

Too fast the tracks say
As they wobble and stray
They cause the train to sway

Too fast the tracks say
As they scream out and say
As the brakes start to fail

Too fast the tracks say
As the train goes off the rail
As the trains bursts into flame

Too fast the tracks say
As the train fills with smoke
As they all start to choke

Too fast the tracks say
As the conductor wakes up
A little too late

Too fast the tracks say
Commuters all dead
I warned you I said

Too Fast

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Silent One February 4, 2018 at 11:50 AM DAmning end.. Well written, guess its dangerous to move too fast in life.. Patricia Leduc February 21, 2018 at 8:12 PM Thank you..I tried moving too fast..mmm don't want to do that again :))

Line Gauthier February 4, 2018 at 12:32 AM I enjoyed your poem, Patricia. Well done. Patricia Leduc February 4, 2018 at 12:56 AM Thank you so much!!