Tonight a Breeze Is Stirring

Hot as blazes summer days
  die gasping for breath
A hazy curtain of humidity
  stifles the earth to death

But tonight a breeze is stirring
  injecting life in the air, so 
I bid adieu to my steaming house
  and went to sleep out there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 6/1/2022 12:50:00 PM
In Greece a great majority of houses have a flat roof, families lock up the house and go upstairs under the starry sky, with a mosquito can, to avoid the heat of a home. Well penned Gershon. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/31/2022 6:25:00 PM
Yeah, it went from 90 yesterday to 63 today.....man did that feel good....
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Date: 5/31/2022 1:04:00 PM
How nice. Such an inviting ending.
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Date: 5/31/2022 8:41:00 AM
Ah, that seems a wise choice. I remember those days before A/C when we would sleep out on a blanket out in the yard. The cool mountain air was so pleasant. Those were the days, my friend....
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Date: 5/31/2022 7:50:00 AM
thank goodness for those breezes, gershon! i hope we get one today - supposed to be in the mid-90's - ugh!
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Date: 5/31/2022 7:40:00 AM
Thankfully you had that breeze Gershon. I hope all is well :)
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Date: 5/31/2022 4:31:00 AM
How lovely to enjoy the breeze, Louise! ;)
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Date: 5/31/2022 1:29:00 AM
I can't seem to sleep without my fan even though my bedroom in downstairs in the basement. I still need the air moving. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/30/2022 9:25:00 PM
I am so thankful to have air-conditioning or a fan. We have centipedes here so sleeping outside doesn’t appeal to me. They are very creative at getting inside. I certainly remember those long hot summer nights. Very good Gershon. Blessings xxoo
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