Tonal Paint

I would like to thank you for your visit.
I have removed these poems for a distant future book publication.
I believe we poets, can make a difference
in this world. We live in the 21st century,
we have tools( technology), we have our past,  and imagination.
We just don't have the courage, because
I guess most are afraid to fail, to loose money.
All I have to say is we can't take money with us,
when we die. I also say hasn't mankind failed enough,
and isn't mankind worth the effort, our children is worth the effort..

Thank you, and my your God Bless you

John E WordSlinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 7, 2009 at 1:57 AM
Now that's a very clever concept to put to poetry. It's almost like you painted a spectrum of colour to music notes as opposed to numerical scale! Your personified references like fingers/pluck/eyes/gaze/see/squint/teach...bring life to the technique. Well done, and thanks for your lovely comments, Happy Easter, Anna-Marie.
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