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For: Double Double Words To Bubble 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

Tomorrow Totality

Tomorrow is simply a taunt
of questions asked long ago,
maybe the anwers bring tempest
or maybe an extravaganza
ready to be played with great zeal;
relax in the shade of the chiquichiqui*
our anwers will come as they must,
with patience we'll greet the new day!

*a type of palm tree
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Romios Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 2:26 PM
Hello.. it’s so obvious to me that you have a good background and writing already. You’re not a brand writer at all I can tell.. And that’s a plus for you ans your skills are obvious. I sent in this poem~ philosophical questions and I really liked it.-)) **I also had sent you a soupmau I forgot to tell you I did, a litle while ago!** Pangie Pangie
Achara Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 5:46 PM
I finally saw the soupmail and responded. It's irritating that I don't always see.those in a timely manner. Thank you for reading my poem and commenting on it. I appreciate that.
Greenhough Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 11:09 AM
I enjoy this lovely acrostic. I thank you for teaching me a new word. The setting causes me to want to visit this place.
Achara Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 2:58 PM
That you. I like the setting too.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:27 AM
What a wonderful/creative Acrostic write with a great picture. Have a blessed day..............
Achara Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Thank you. It was a bit challenging to write, but quite fun!
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