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Tomorrow

Days pass by, roses wear away
But as our earth moves around
In another voice it'll have its say
What has left must come around


Babies looking for tomorrow
Patients will buy bone marrow
A dent in  the poverty sorrow
At Mars they will love to row

Our children and grandchildren
Will be discoverers and leaders
Future guitar for soul they'll listen
For their poetry novel meters

Smells of your love we don't have now
Tomorrow it'll be a collapsing cascade
Adventurous address in your eyebrows
Tomorrow another pink in your shade

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31 October, 2019
I sense Tomorrow is the Future 
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 11/16/2019 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on your honorable mention win in the "I sense tomorrow is the future" contest. I like the control of your stanzas and lines, the future sounds full if sad. Thanks for joining.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/31/2019 10:52:00 AM
An interesting write. Love the first verse.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/1/2019 3:27:00 AM
I value your comments, Kim ... Thank you ....
Date: 10/31/2019 6:26:00 AM
"Our children and grandchildren Will be discoverers and leaders" -this is for sure!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/1/2019 3:30:00 AM
Absolutely ... Thanks for dropping by and going through ...

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