Vera Duggan Poet Rhyme

Tommy Tittlemouse

Little Tommy Tittlemouse
Lived alone in a great big house
Had no sisters, had no brothers
And didn't care too much for others

One day whilst Tommy was playing house
When he came across a friendly mouse
He said 'hey mouse, would you play with me
And then we'll have a cup of tea

So off they went, these two together
And had some fun.  It was nice weather
Into the cupboards they did look
And from these cupboards, cheese they took

The sat outside and both got full
Then Tommy trotted off to school
He looked at mouse and said good day
And then he went upon his way

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Anna Hopper September 10, 2025 at 6:20 PM Light hearted and cute! Loved the flow! It made me smile!

Cynthia Buhain-Baello March 28, 2016 at 8:37 PM Very nice story poem Vera, engaging and creatively written. Enjoyed reading it.~~~Cynthia

Eve Roper July 5, 2015 at 12:07 PM These stories are wonderful Hugs Eve and another 10++ Vera Duggan July 6, 2015 at 12:16 AM Another one in the book Eve and thank you so much once again for the 10++.....Take care my friend........Vera

Kp Nunez June 3, 2015 at 5:42 AM Lovely rhyme for kids! You're talented! Nice to know this will go into a children's book! hugs! Kim Vera Duggan June 3, 2015 at 7:21 PM Kim my dear thank you so much for reading this poem and commenting hope you are well, take care my friend............Vera.......

Harry Horsman June 2, 2015 at 8:02 AM This is wonderful, breaks down the age barrier too, Vera Duggan June 2, 2015 at 11:27 PM Thank you so much for the comment and the visit Harry, yes it is to go in a childrens book very soon. Take care..........Vera.........

Shadow Hamilton June 1, 2015 at 3:15 PM ah this is wonderful Vera so touching hugs 7 and fav Vera Duggan June 2, 2015 at 11:25 PM Hi Shadow, how are you? thank you for reading my childrens poem, it will be going into a childrens book through another site hopefully, thank you for the 7 and take care..............Vera................

Paul Callus June 1, 2015 at 8:38 AM How very cute, Vera!! You could have a whole series of Tommy Tittlemouse poems, enough for a book! All you'll need is colorful pictures to go with them. All the best....paul Vera Duggan June 2, 2015 at 11:23 PM Paul what a brilliant idea a whole series of books, that is more a Peter thing, not me i'm afraid, thank you so much for reading Paul, hope you and the wife are well, take care.......Vera...........

Nette Onclaud June 1, 2015 at 4:18 AM simply whimsical.. you delight, vera... smiling now!.. huggs Vera Duggan June 2, 2015 at 11:20 PM Nette I can just see you smiling, thank you for the lovely comment and for the visit, take care............Vera...........

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2015 at 8:30 AM - A cute story, Vera - Love it :) - I wish you a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vera Duggan May 28, 2015 at 7:33 PM Hi Anne Lise, thank you so much for visiting my page once again and reading this little kiddies poem, I wrote it to be published into a kiddies book so thank you for reading, hope you are well, Take care...........Vera..........