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Tommy the Donkey

There once was a donkey called Tommy Who the kids all thought was funny. The icecream van he would reach, when giving rides at the beach. Then stop dead 'till they all got a lolly.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2016 9:10:00 PM

so cute. I LIKES it.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/22/2016 1:13:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. My father bought a donkey we called Tommy. He used to put his head in the open kitched window. Tommy also had a trap. Now those rides were fun.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/21/2016 11:15:00 AM

Sounds like Tommy was on commission. Fun write Jean...

Jean Murray
Date: 4/21/2016 11:26:00 AM

A carrot a customer Charlie.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/21/2016 6:00:00 AM

So nice of u Jean. Wonderful write.........hugs

Jean Murray
Date: 4/21/2016 6:43:00 AM

Thank you Manmath.