Tommy the Donkey

There once was a donkey called Tommy
Who the kids all thought was funny.
The icecream van he would reach,
when giving rides at the beach.
Then stop dead 'till they all got a lolly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 9:10 PM
so cute. I LIKES it.
Murray Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Andrea. My father bought a donkey we called Tommy. He used to put his head in the open kitched window. Tommy also had a trap. Now those rides were fun.
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Sounds like Tommy was on commission. Fun write Jean...
Murray Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 11:26 AM
A carrot a customer Charlie.
Dalei Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 6:00 AM
So nice of u Jean. Wonderful write.........hugs
Murray Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Thank you Manmath.
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