Tommy

Today is a blank sheet
Oh! What desires I need to meet
Must some go lacking
Most important are the people 
You being one that needs my attention

My first post..
05-08-2009

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 4, 2011 at 5:11 PM

awesome lines then and now Sara.. a rare beauty of compassion and dedication to others luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 2, 2011 at 2:28 PM

Very creative and interesting first post, Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 2, 2011 at 1:01 PM

Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Sara. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

June 2, 2011 at 11:52 AM

Lovely words, Sara. Your first post too : ) I thought you made a great job of the Sapphic stanza. I really must try it sometime. If you'd like advice, I know Debbie mentioned that she was working on one. Andrea wrote a great one too.