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Tomfoolery

Tiptoe through the tulips 
Tumble across the grass
Teasing behind a tree
Try kiss a Bonny lass
Time out for a sandwich 
Taste homemade lemonade 
Those days will never fade


Pleiades T Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman 
Syllable counter PS 7x6
27/04/2021

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Kim Merryman Date: 4/29/2021 8:49:00 AM David, what a creative choice for a title! I loved the light-heartedness of your description! Delightful! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/29/2021 9:09:00 AM Thank you Kim, I’d say unusually lighthearted for me, most times I’m swinging sledgehammers, lol, I enjoyed writing this for your contest, and am delighted with the placement, cheers David

Gary Radice Date: 4/28/2021 11:03:00 AM Hi David - loving the T - iny T - im reference :) Childhood is such a great resource for poetry isn't it? Congra - T - ulations! Cheers - Gary Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/28/2021 12:23:00 PM Thanks Gary, I see your getting into the Pleiades mode, T - rific, it’s actually quite enjoyable, indeed childhood memories are a great Reservoir to tap into every now and then, cheers David

Sotto Poet Date: 4/27/2021 9:07:00 PM Hi David this is a great T Pleiades, I don’t know how I miss it, but I’m back with congratulations for a job very well done my friend this is a pure gem going straight to my Favorites. Have a great evening and best regards dear friend Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/28/2021 12:01:00 AM Heya Lasaad thank you for breaking the news I had no idea about the placement til now, I’m delighted you enjoyed my little Pleiades childhood memory poem, and to get a fave from you even better, cheers David

Eve Roper Date: 4/27/2021 7:53:00 PM Great Pleiades, david , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/28/2021 12:03:00 AM Thank you Eve was an enjoyment to write, and I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Panagiota Romios Date: 4/27/2021 1:48:00 PM Hi David Lovely memories....good luck to you Pangagiota xx Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/27/2021 2:12:00 PM Heya Pangie thank you, Indeed great memories what would we do without them, I’m trying to forget the bad ones, or at least not dwell on them, for a little while anyway, cheers David

Jan Allison Date: 4/27/2021 11:52:00 AM what a fun poem and I've got tiptoe through the tulips song buzzing through my brain lol:-) hugs Jab xx Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/27/2021 12:41:00 PM Heya Jan, it’s quiet a carefree poem reflecting some childhood memories, that can never be bought or forgotten, playing about making our own silly fun, cheers David

L Milton Hankins Date: 4/27/2021 11:25:00 AM This is a good one, David. I think it will place high in the contest. I hope! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/27/2021 12:49:00 PM Thanks Milton, one of those innocent times in our lives not a care in the world, I think it was real, it seemed real, even though now I know, it was oblivion from the reality, that childhood doesn’t last, we must grow up, cheers David