Tombstone

When you scribe on my last rock
                   Make sure that the words are nice and fit
          If not, I may come back as a scary spirit and visit you one day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 15, 2009 at 9:57 PM
Thanks for the warning, Danny. Interesting and funny write. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
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October 15, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Surely, you have nothing to fear, Danny. The words on your Tombstone should evoke the gentility in your lovely poem. Love, Carolyn
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October 15, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Oh my goodness Danny. Excellent writing. Love, Carol
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October 15, 2009 at 4:15 AM
I hope not. RIP. Sara
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