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toma esta

. It's not az that bottle no one ever really found washed up spit out from thuh sea It's this bottle i stood mine thewz rattling prep'd tuh toss it but i know'd i'd find ya under bankerz my this morn'nin

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2025 5:14:00 AM

This one has me wondering. Is it a bottle of alcoholic beverage under the blanket? A drinking problem maybe? Sara K

James Peranteau
Date: 1/28/2025 10:40:00 AM

..it do... eve did ')

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2025 3:32:00 PM

James, I thought that in Spanish that toma esta means take this. Sara K

James Peranteau
Date: 1/8/2025 6:01:00 AM

ya know i'm crack'n up Sara...'tiz edvard being bombastic to hiz princess dear poet; 'twere thuh love note, quintessential edvard ') Happy New Year(yearz) Sara....much love...p.s...thuh title en español; "take this" <'twere thuh love note hon ,)