toma esta

.

It's not az that bottle
  no one ever really
          found
      washed up 
        spit out
       from thuh
           sea

   It's this bottle
        i stood
     mine thewz
        rattling
   prep'd tuh toss it
         but i
       know'd i'd find 
           ya
   under   bankerz 
          my
          this morn'nin

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Date: 1/8/2025 5:14:00 AM
This one has me wondering. Is it a bottle of alcoholic beverage under the blanket? A drinking problem maybe? Sara K
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James Peranteau
Date: 1/28/2025 10:40:00 AM
..it do... eve did ')
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2025 3:32:00 PM
James, I thought that in Spanish that toma esta means take this. Sara K
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James Peranteau
Date: 1/8/2025 6:01:00 AM
ya know i'm crack'n up Sara...'tiz edvard being bombastic to hiz princess dear poet; 'twere thuh love note, quintessential edvard ') Happy New Year(yearz) Sara....much love...p.s...thuh title en español; "take this" <'twere thuh love note hon ,)
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