Tolerable

No dreams
Only fantasies
In the bed of insecurity

No vision
Eyes open
But not to see

You’re just a reflection
In-sightless
Incapable.  Incomprehensible.
Tolerable.

Hold me now
Take away my feelings
Sway me. Save me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 13, 2009 at 6:21 AM
Lots of depth in this. I especially liked the 3rd stanza. Excellent write. :) Love, Amy
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