Toil

Destiny whiteout
on the long winding highway...
many turns in my life.

© Harry J Horsman 2012

lifesenryu

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Eve Roper

July 4, 2015 at 12:19 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

July 4, 2015 at 8:36 AM

I love it! Congrats Harry.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 3, 2015 at 10:22 PM

Great one harry, congrats on ur big win!

Kim Merryman

July 3, 2015 at 8:45 PM

Congrats on your win, Harry! Well done! Love, Kim

Skat A

July 3, 2015 at 6:47 PM

HARRY, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 6:24 PM

Harry, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2015 at 4:48 PM

I really like your winning poem, harry. Congratulations!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 1:35 PM

Brilliant senryu, Harry! There are so many twists and turns in life, it can certainly be so overwhelming at times. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Pandita

John Lawless

July 3, 2015 at 9:49 AM

A mentor of mine once described life as a creative spiral wherein we meet many similar situations at different times in our spiritual journey. Congrats on the win Harry. Nicely written

Marvin G. Celestial

July 3, 2015 at 4:50 AM

Great Harry! Congratz!

Poet Destroyer A

December 14, 2012 at 2:34 PM

Hello Harry, you are the best... and right now, I'm wishing for the whiteout to exit off the highways I'm on... most of my turns are taking a rough ride up the destiny mountain... good thinking...pd

Richard Lamoureux

November 28, 2012 at 6:14 PM

It does seem long at first but as we get closer to the end it feels like the car has picked up a lot of speed. Kinda scarey especialy if your driving in a whiteout. Great little poem Harry.

Bl Devnath

November 22, 2012 at 8:38 AM

Hi! friend, enjoy the life what it is. Life always gives, bystanders come and go because they have their own life. A place without destiny is one's own place. Lovely done, always loved, bl

Andrea Dietrich

November 21, 2012 at 6:09 PM

wow, what an inspired line: destiny whiteout! This is another great senryu. I love that you are on a roll with your short poems right now. thanks for having some new ones for me to see today. You have taken the time to check out my oldies and I feel bad that I have been so busy and not visiting your poetry. It was a super busy day. Right now I'm waiting any moment for our doorbell to ring. Our son and his wife and baby have traveled here to come see us and dinner is warming in the oven!

Sandra Adams

November 21, 2012 at 5:21 PM

love this image... well done!

Matthew Anish

November 21, 2012 at 9:49 AM

Fine use ot this Asian form. You stuck to the 5 - 7- 5 form which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Kash Poet

November 20, 2012 at 10:21 AM

Good one Harry!Enjoyed the read.

Ilene Bauer

November 20, 2012 at 8:42 AM

nice one - i like it!

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2012 at 7:44 AM

Very expressive of life..Enjoyed reading this morn..On the mistakes that I made along the way, I wish that I could use some whiteout but that is not possible..Thank God that He is a merciful and forgving and gracious God..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks so much for stopping by..Sara