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Together We Were a Pencil

together we were a pencil i would write down all our dreams then you would erase them

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2012 5:29:00 PM

LILLIAN, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/20/2012 7:04:00 AM

[smudged charcoal/ on a full page--the kettle whistles] Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2012 12:07:00 PM

Good one Lillian. - Welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Wish you luck. - Give comments and get comments. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West

Date: 11/12/2012 8:36:00 PM

Hi Lillian, what a great write, I agree with Michael, didn't see the end coming. Rollo

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/12/2012 7:33:00 PM

Never saw the ending coming. Great poetry. Very very good!! Michael