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Together In Separate Worlds

Train passes by no common world incursion It’s closed space with internal lumination The passengers in drowsy introversion Each a universe of personal fixation Taken from: ‘Advent Morning Star’ 21 December 2019 Arbitrium Divisa 5 Contest Sponsor: Gregory Barden

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Date: 12/21/2019 7:01:00 PM
a very interesting verse. Aren't these contest of Gregory's fun!!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/9/2020 3:14:00 AM
They help to draw the most out of a longer creation. Thanks for the response, Andrea.

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