Geoffrey Brewer Poet Rhyme

Together In Separate Worlds

Train passes by no common world incursion
It’s closed space with internal lumination
The passengers in drowsy introversion
Each a universe of personal fixation


Taken from: ‘Advent Morning Star’
21 December 2019
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Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2019 at 7:01 PM a very interesting verse. Aren't these contest of Gregory's fun!! Geoffrey Brewer January 9, 2020 at 3:14 AM They help to draw the most out of a longer creation. Thanks for the response, Andrea.