Together But a Part

Distinct,but complementary
flowers of mutual fusion,
in perfect harmony;
Sensibililties will embrace,
incensed by aromas of love,
the bond is revealed;
Opposites,yet in alikeness
the attraction of natural
magnetism is sealed;

Within the uniqueness of husband and wife
in union,complete,as one,for life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 5:33 PM
enjoyed pretty poem, keep sharing.
Jordan Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 4:20 AM
Brian this poem is amazing and will be added to my favorites - Thank you for placing me in your Defining Time contest - Hopefully life will slow down a bit and I can find time to join another soon - My respect goes out to you always my friend, God Bless, mj
Sweetheart Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 6:49 PM
Many ways to look at and write about the subject of love... this is a different spin which I so enjoyed reading Brian.. thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie...
Kapoor Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Brilliant lines and a Gem of a Poem. You have captured the essence of relationship and true happiness. First two lines of your Poem is outstandingly beautiful-'Distinct, but complementary flowers of mutual fusion' Thanks. With best wishes and love ...x Ravindra ...xxx Brian Strand
Kendrick Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 4:10 AM
How can that possibly happen???Only with God's help...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Kelly Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 2:21 AM
Great words , as ever , Brian . None of us got a " kick " out of last week-end !!! . Reality check !! ?? ....
Bathsheba Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 1:52 AM
I like these words spoken in this write Brian - Thanks for sharing -:)
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