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Together

This warmth inside, they say it is my heart
But all this time it beat and I did never notice
Where did it hide? This glowing thing there
Where? This spreading feeling rosy red
While I'm in bed it warms me. But how
did it get in? Sometimes I grin but do not
understand, strange land of undiscovered
magnitude, I lived so long in solitude that
everything and nothing passed me by till
you that is, till you, but why does thinking
about you make me warm. Is it that you
live in my heart? And I no longer fake
the smile upon my face, the curling of
my mouth. If you live inside of me, do
I in you? Can that be true? I do?

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October 03, 2017
Copyright © Darren White

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Harshita Chaudhary October 17, 2017 at 10:19 PM Nice poem. Darren White October 18, 2017 at 12:31 AM Thank you :)

Frances Schiavina October 9, 2017 at 9:58 AM Wonderful poem. Congratulations! Darren White October 12, 2017 at 6:17 AM Thank you :)

Darlene De Beaulieu October 8, 2017 at 8:40 PM Darren I have enjoyed this love poem.All my best to you my friend. have agood evening my friend. Darren White October 9, 2017 at 3:02 AM Thank you Darlene :)

Arthur Vaso October 5, 2017 at 9:51 PM I missed this and also as POTD but what a well deserved poem!! :) Darren White October 7, 2017 at 2:39 AM Is cute, isn't it? :)

Line Gauthier October 4, 2017 at 11:40 AM Well captured and well crafted Darren White October 4, 2017 at 11:43 AM Thank you Line :)

Vijay Pandit October 4, 2017 at 5:57 AM A poem of deep reflection--congratulations Darren on well deserved POTD honor! Darren White October 4, 2017 at 11:42 AM Thank you very much Vijay :)

Kishan Sharma October 4, 2017 at 12:34 AM Congratulations dear, Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:40 AM Thank you so much :)

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2017 at 4:56 PM This is a wonderful poem, Darren and I see it got POTD. Big congrats for that!!! Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:40 AM Thanks so much Andrea :)

Tim Smith October 3, 2017 at 1:43 PM So beautiful...you're love is shining Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:39 AM Happy you love it my friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2017 at 1:03 PM - Hooray ... Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:39 AM Anne-Lise, thank you :)

Dale Gregory Cozart October 3, 2017 at 12:48 PM Congrats on POTD, Darren! Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:38 AM Dale, thank you :)

Eve Roper October 3, 2017 at 10:38 AM Darren, I feel that if you are in love and both are mutual that you are as one,inside.. Well that is how I feel with my hubby.. Happy Birthday and congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`* Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:38 AM Wow Eve, thank you so much :)

Faith Adedeji October 3, 2017 at 9:02 AM That's really good Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:38 AM Thank you Faith :)

Winged Warrior October 3, 2017 at 7:55 AM Congrats my friend...POTD!!!...Yahoo!...well deserved...god bless...*WW* Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:37 AM Thank you so much :)

Charlie Smith October 3, 2017 at 7:29 AM Hopelessly romantic Darren, well done and congratulations for POTD honors. Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:37 AM Thank you Charlie, I agree ;)

Susan Ashley October 3, 2017 at 6:03 AM Congratulations on POTD honors with this fantastically romantic write Darren! Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:37 AM Thanks so much :)

Shubham Pal Chowdhury October 3, 2017 at 5:46 AM And this is fab Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:37 AM Thank you :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 3, 2017 at 5:16 AM I love this :) Congratulations sweet P hugs xomo Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:36 AM Thanks ma mo :)

Maria Williams October 3, 2017 at 3:44 AM Such a romantic poem Darren, straight from the heart. So deserving of POTD, congratulations....Maria Darren White October 4, 2017 at 12:36 AM Thanks Maria :)

Patricia Cresswell October 2, 2017 at 10:53 PM It is glorious, priceless love my dear poet. Gobble it up and give it back because when you are in love the whole wold benefits. I am so happy for you! Darren White October 3, 2017 at 1:25 AM heh exactly Patricia, the whole world gets a little jollier when you're in love :)

Richard Lamoureux October 2, 2017 at 7:01 PM You are a romantic my friend. A attribute worth cultivating. Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem. Darren White October 3, 2017 at 1:24 AM Richard, thank you :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon October 2, 2017 at 3:17 PM I see togetherness in your style, Darren. The appeals are dexterously crafted. Glad to read your lines after sometimes. Darren White October 3, 2017 at 1:21 AM Thank you very much Adeniji :) You were missed.