Together

In the world of sadness, 
I search for happiness.
In the world of grief,
I search for relief.
In the world of hate,
I search for care.

In the world of discrimination, 
I search for a together nation.
In the world of corruption,
I search for education.
In the world of blue,
I search for you.

Cause I know we could achieve it all, 
If we think bigger than small, 
If we come together and fight for each other,
If we remove greed and become tougher.
Cause I know we will achieve it together!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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McBride  Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 10:13 PM
Amen, to this , great inspiration and encouragement for all to seek better
McBride  Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Hope your exams are going well , don't worry about me, oh how I miss those days LOL : ). I am just looking forward to more writing from you,
Walimbe Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 4:01 AM
Thank you for commenting Stephan good to see you again...currently busy with my exmas so will surely visit your page soon!
Ray Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 4:09 PM
a lot of hope therein...nice write
Walimbe Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 3:30 AM
Thank you for commenting here Timothy! Have a great day!:)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Very nice!
Walimbe Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Thank you for commenting here kim! Blessings and hugs :)
Sands Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Wow. Excellent poem! A fave for me :)
Walimbe Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Thank you so much for commenting ,glad you liked it!:)
Horsman Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 10:49 PM
Oh yes the good fight worth fighting for, and so is the poetry, and this gem, you write. Komal.
Walimbe Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 3:37 AM
Yes, It truly is...Thank you so much for your kind comment harry! Have a great day!:)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 12:26 PM
A really lovely piece Komal,, with great rhyme and flow too. Have a great day, Gordon
Walimbe Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Thank you Gordon, Glad you liked this one! Have a great day to you too there!:)
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 12:10 PM
This is a delightful and smooth flowing poem, Komal. Somehow it reminds me of the song "Together we shall overcome!" recorded many years ago! Keep your trusty pen busy! ~ Regards // paul
Walimbe Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Thank you so much Paul again...It's really nice to meet kind poets like you here, I will do search for the song...And I shall will keep writing more! Have a great day:)
Gasun Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Wow! You've penned a very beautiful inspirational and uplifting poem my dear new poet friend Komal . Determination to search is indeed the answer for every problem. I like your poem so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and your precious time to read one of my poems. God bless you. Hugs
Walimbe Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Glad you liked this one Len! Thanks for you so kind comment here! Have a great day dear friend!:)
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