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In the world of sadness, I search for happiness. In the world of grief, I search for relief. In the world of hate, I search for care. In the world of discrimination, I search for a together nation. In the world of corruption, I search for education. In the world of blue, I search for you. Cause I know we could achieve it all, If we think bigger than small, If we come together and fight for each other, If we remove greed and become tougher. Cause I know we will achieve it together!

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Date: 2/5/2023 10:13:00 PM
Amen, to this , great inspiration and encouragement for all to seek better
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Stephan McBride
Date: 2/6/2023 6:22:00 AM
Hope your exams are going well , don't worry about me, oh how I miss those days LOL : ). I am just looking forward to more writing from you,
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/6/2023 4:01:00 AM
Thank you for commenting Stephan good to see you again...currently busy with my exmas so will surely visit your page soon!
Date: 6/9/2022 4:09:00 PM
a lot of hope therein...nice write
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 6/10/2022 3:30:00 AM
Thank you for commenting here Timothy! Have a great day!:)
Date: 6/4/2022 6:11:00 AM
Very nice!
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 6/4/2022 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for commenting here kim! Blessings and hugs :)
Date: 5/22/2022 11:35:00 AM
Wow. Excellent poem! A fave for me :)
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/22/2022 9:10:00 PM
Thank you so much for commenting ,glad you liked it!:)
Date: 5/20/2022 10:49:00 PM
Oh yes the good fight worth fighting for, and so is the poetry, and this gem, you write. Komal.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/21/2022 3:37:00 AM
Yes, It truly is...Thank you so much for your kind comment harry! Have a great day!:)
Date: 5/19/2022 12:26:00 PM
A really lovely piece Komal,, with great rhyme and flow too. Have a great day, Gordon
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/20/2022 12:33:00 AM
Thank you Gordon, Glad you liked this one! Have a great day to you too there!:)
Date: 5/19/2022 12:10:00 PM
This is a delightful and smooth flowing poem, Komal. Somehow it reminds me of the song "Together we shall overcome!" recorded many years ago! Keep your trusty pen busy! ~ Regards // paul
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/20/2022 12:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Paul again...It's really nice to meet kind poets like you here, I will do search for the song...And I shall will keep writing more! Have a great day:)
Date: 5/19/2022 6:02:00 AM
Wow! You've penned a very beautiful inspirational and uplifting poem my dear new poet friend Komal . Determination to search is indeed the answer for every problem. I like your poem so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and your precious time to read one of my poems. God bless you. Hugs
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/19/2022 8:10:00 AM
Glad you liked this one Len! Thanks for you so kind comment here! Have a great day dear friend!:)

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