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Together

Life is not worth it, so much agony. I've learned not to be dependent, can't everyone see? In death, we will always be together. So take a deep breath, and I'll hold you forever. Together we stand, no one can break me. Together hand in hand, I want it so badly. I'm falling asleep, I start to dream. I wake and weep, I start to scream. Without you, I feel so sick. I barely make it through, in this life sorrow will stick. The words I hear, kill me everyday. Though I don't fall a tear, I fade away. Just one kiss, changed my world. Your face is what I miss, for you are my girl. Erase my past, look into our future. Together we will last, for our love so pure. The time will fly by, still we hold on. When I hear you cry, I swear I'll make the pain gone. Together we kiss, every night. I can't dismiss, how you fought my fright. Do you care, what they think? This love do you share, or does your heart sink? Seeing your face, reflect from the stary skies. Together in this place, all sorrow dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/18/2008 6:00:00 PM
Hey red my new poem Unbelievable And tell me what you think about it. . .
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Date: 10/2/2008 11:11:00 AM
I hear your heart pouring out to her, very descriptive good way with words, definitly hear you asking her to respond to you---"Do you care what they think"? Not sure about her love--"This love do you share, or does your heart sink"? Definite good answer. "Together in this place, all sorrow dies." I like that!!" all sorrow dies"!!! Not the person but the sorrow!! Excellent write!! Smiles Phebe
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Date: 8/21/2008 7:30:00 PM
Steven - Very well done job of clearly expressing your true love for another - God Bless
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