Togather We Ran

young lovers know that traggic passion blind to failure 
blind to everything that doesnt see them togather.
So in early morning passion just befor light.
they slip off togather dreams and hope taken along 
for the ride.

long brown chessnut colored hair flowing out the window 
along with are dreams.
A fence post marker the road togther holds
a certin magic it seems.

Love made from state to state
the waterfall to which we did race 
skinny dippin togather by that old forgoten place
Your naked  beauty etched within my mind along with
the hapinees reflected from your face.

Broke down in blue springs Missouri.
Now i dont question why your eyes 
were overcast with worry.

Apart the nightmare cant erase thoose nights spent
laying in blissful silence your head apon my chest.
Memories depend apon your view.
I 'll just kiss the that jasmine scented southern
breeze for the rest.

My darlin I ask fingers interlocked 
with time my heart what shall be 
are plan.
A tear touches that vision of a face.
As you recall the memories of when togather we 
ran.   

Inspired by a dream  about the other half of my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/16/2009 4:49:00 PM
i dont know whats wrong with that james guy but you write very beautifully. Amazing work
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Date: 10/24/2009 5:50:00 AM
Your so stupid I told you the truth now everyone can laugh at you check your soupmail you idot
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Date: 10/22/2009 5:58:00 PM
So sad and beautifully written, John. I can tell you are a man who loves deeply! What a talent you have for evoking emotion. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/22/2009 4:06:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a little of you with us through your words today John. I enjoy reading your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2009 1:56:00 PM
The other half of your heart inspired you beautifully.a fav John..Romance,passion,memories..dreams..beautiful--Charma
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:44:00 AM
Interesting love story. Very passionate. Keep writing. Sara
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