Toes of Rain

August spills rains with tapped grains, like pearl veins on roofs Drenched in soft hue, toes play new songs of blue night’s chant
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Arana Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Hey Nette, congratulations on your poem being featured this week.Your images, so delicate and rich for a short form!
Guzzi Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Hi nette I check my than bauk thanks for the heads up my syllable counter only counted diamond as 2..replaced with gem stone..BUt I do not see any miss placement of the rhyme pattern if you still do let me know. Light & Love
Sampath Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 1:32 AM
you have a way with words. Short and deep
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 8:38 PM
reminds me of Florida for some reason! Sweet!:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 11:14 PM
Lots of nice internal rhyming in this one, dear! Good luck in the contest.
Seraphin Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 10:25 PM
* "My Heart Seems to Melt Amid These Beautiful * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Nette * I Don't Know * Tis Just Sooo Beautiful * Just Like Toy * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *to
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November 16, 2011 at 9:31 PM
I love this entry Nette.... good luck..p.d.
Poet Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 11:57 AM
A little gem from you Nette.Best wishes.
Lane Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Good luck Nette
Sivey Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Very very awesome write nette! "of blue night's croons, " such an awesome line!! You can't imagine what images this line brings to my imagination, and feelings so strong! Thank you for bringing this poem into my life, I greatly appreciate that!! Great work!!
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