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Toes of Rain

August spills rains
with tapped grains, like
pearl veins on roofs

Drenched in soft hue,
toes play new songs
of blue night’s chant  

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Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011

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Norma Arana Date: 4/1/2014 11:57:00 PM Hey Nette, congratulations on your poem being featured this week.Your images, so delicate and rich for a short form! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/17/2012 5:38:00 PM Hi nette I check my than bauk thanks for the heads up my syllable counter only counted diamond as 2..replaced with gem stone..BUt I do not see any miss placement of the rhyme pattern if you still do let me know. Light & Love Login to Reply

Janani Sampath Date: 1/11/2012 1:32:00 AM you have a way with words. Short and deep Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 11/19/2011 8:38:00 PM reminds me of Florida for some reason! Sweet!:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/17/2011 11:14:00 PM Lots of nice internal rhyming in this one, dear! Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Sarah Seraphin Date: 11/16/2011 10:25:00 PM * "My Heart Seems to Melt Amid These Beautiful * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Nette * I Don't Know * Tis Just Sooo Beautiful * Just Like Toy * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *to Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/16/2011 9:31:00 PM I love this entry Nette.... good luck..p.d. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/16/2011 11:57:00 AM A little gem from you Nette.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Tony Lane Date: 11/16/2011 11:15:00 AM Good luck Nette Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/16/2011 9:37:00 AM Very very awesome write nette! "of blue night's croons, " such an awesome line!! You can't imagine what images this line brings to my imagination, and feelings so strong! Thank you for bringing this poem into my life, I greatly appreciate that!! Great work!! Login to Reply