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Today’s Good Deed

In your open hand
I placed a red rose petal upon it

You looked up at me in puzzlement
Curiosity won over fear

I replied “ the rose petal fell from the sky”
As I tried to capture and hold, it fluttered to your hand

I am sorry, was not I… simply the wind
You smiled retrieving your hand back to the pen

umm, ummm , excuse me miss
Sorry to disturb encore

You looked up, maybe even wishing me gone
I looked down, how does one fix that frown?

These by the way are for you, please, absorb the fragrance
Twelve lovely red roses

Oh but now your face is the absolute same color
Your frown is a smile

Alas beauty has fallen onto beauty
The mist of yesterdays tear, evaporates

but but but stranger man, why me?
The rose petal was a sign for us both you see

You so wished to know there is kindness in this world
I so wished to make anyone at all smile, even but for a moment

So you see, we both have achieved a goal today
I bid you good day, wishing thee well with flowery bouquet

Off I went, across the street, lurking in the shadows
Following close behind, almost empty street

Behind, a wire quickly wrapped around the neck
I slit the throat, blood spurting to the skies

Shock and wonder, why why why?
Death though came fast, I walked away

The roses made her smile only for a moment
Ah but her stalkers death by my hands.............

Shall wipe the sadness and frown
Her fears you see, I just drowned

In blood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/20/2016 1:04:00 PM
wow, i was hanging on to every line, arthur.. a greeat thriller of a piece!..huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 9:45:00 PM
Hi there Nette, thanks so much! :) hugs!
Date: 4/20/2016 9:03:00 AM
Great story telling! The kind of twist I just adore!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 9:44:00 PM
I was sure you would like this twist! Lets do the twist!
Date: 4/20/2016 1:55:00 AM
What a twist to the tale - love the way you build the poem up with romance only to shatter the dream with the spilling of blood as red as those roses... am now thankful hubby has NEVER given me red roses lol:-) Your creativity never fails to impress:-) hugs jan xx7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thanks Jan!!!! :)

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