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Today, Inside I Am Broken

I always wake up early, But today I have no capacity to leave the bed anymore, I always respect time, But today I have no capacity to see the clock anymore, I always eats a lot, But today I am not feeling hunger anymore because today,inside I'm broken. I love to play with friends, But today I have no power to left for the ground anymore, I love to meet new people, But today I have no power to see the new faces anymore, I always thank people for the good, But today I have no capacity to speak a single word anymore because today ,inside I'm broken. I never tear in public, But today I have no capacity to smile anymore, I always offer my hand to needy, But today I have no capacity to help anymore, I never hate people, But today I have no capacity to love anymore because today ,inside I'm broken. It may be the worst day of my life, People will judge me by,what I did today, But I will die slowly and slowly, If my dearest one leaves me today because, Today,inside I'm broken.

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Moon Flower

Date: 4/17/2016 9:12:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Vinay. :)

Vinay Thakur
Date: 4/18/2016 8:17:00 AM

Thank you...

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/13/2016 8:06:00 PM

Dear Vinay, Nice first entry.It is an amazing poem.Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Vinay Thakur
Date: 4/18/2016 8:17:00 AM

Thank you ....

Skat A

Date: 4/13/2016 11:31:00 AM

vinay Thakur, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Vinay Thakur
Date: 4/13/2016 12:33:00 PM

#SkatA...Thank you ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2016 7:58:00 AM

Vinay, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Vinay Thakur
Date: 4/13/2016 8:39:00 AM

#poetdestroyerA .. Thank you?