Today Im Feeling Blue

Today I’m feeling real blue
Tomorrow I won’t
But for today I still do
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 2:24 PM
I like this little poem, steve.
Winter Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Hi Steve. Thanks so much for your thoughtful congrats on my haiku! So very appreciated. Well, this one I can relate very well to, as it seems I have the blues quite often these days. Great write. love, shar
Strand Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 2:18 AM
Nice one Steve,Thank you for your kind words and comments on my crystalline.Rgds Brian
Mason Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 2:40 PM
This is very clever but the form is a "Senryu" instead of a Haiku. A Senryu is the same syllable count as a haiku but is used to describe human nature as you have done so beautifully with this write. A Haiku is used when describing nature in general but not human ... smile ... being at PoetrySoup can be a real education ... LOL ... hope you don't mind my comments!!
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