Today, I Guess

Today, I Guess

I stood in the shower, ‘til the water turned cold,
felt like a tough day was about to unfold.
On the edge of the bed, I sighed and got dressed,
I’m gonna’ really miss someone today, I guess.
 
The pot of coffee I made was a little too strong,
I lost count of the scoops, and perked it too long.
Like a wet, heavy blanket, you can’t throw aside,
the last page of our fairy-tale, storybook lied.
The bill must’ve arrived for past sins I must pay,
I guess I just really miss someone today.

Picked up the newspaper, again and again,
I’m seeing the words but I don’t comprehend.
All my thoughts and my focus, just seem to digress,
I just really miss someone today, I guess.
The sun may be shining, but my skies are grey,
I want the hot sun to burn these dark clouds away.
Like eyes on a painting, I’m staring so far away,
I guess I just really miss someone today.

The unscathed proclaim, that time heals all wounds,
still I’m haunted by flashes from a warm afternoon.
Perhaps more time is needed, but nevertheless,
I just really miss someone today, I guess.
Feels like my ship's docked in Melancholy Bay,
I guess I just really miss someone today.

My spirits always pick up upon her arrival,
her loving smile is essential, to my soul’s survival.
Before falling asleep I whisper, “Darling, I had a bad day”,
she says, “I know you did honey, I had one yesterday”.
We get up every morning with great loss to address,
that’s what happens when you really miss someone, I guess.
The sun may be shining, but my skies are grey,
I guess I just really miss someone today.

 c Copyright 2007

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/2/2008 11:40:00 AM
Hi Tom, well crafted and expressed ... and not so much as we both now know, but as much as we both share....
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:59:00 PM
Tom, Welcome to the 'soup' bowl. Excellent job expressing your loneliness. I am experiencing the same and I definitely feel your pain right where you are. The silence is deafening as I wrote in Deafening Silence, please check it out and let me know what you think. We are creatures that need someone to care for us and someone to care for. Hope it all works out for you someday.......JEPR
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Date: 11/17/2008 1:00:00 PM
So sorry for your loss Tom. Such a moving poem. Touches the reader's heart deeply. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/17/2008 12:33:00 PM
What a touching, and heartfelt poem. You did what a great poet does...you made us feel the emotion that comes with missing someone with all one's heart. Well done. Welcome, Tom. ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/17/2008 11:20:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup where you are amongst good company. this is a very poignant piece. Masterful in its own way...Raul
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