Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Today I Feel So Jaded

Looking after aged parents is taking its toll on me
Just need a little bit of 'me time' simply to be free

Time to sit and write poems under a shady tree
Or go down to the beach and paddle in the deep blue sea

Go out riding on a quad bike and have a little fun
Lounge in my bikini top and catch a little sun

Sit and drink a cocktail on a tropical beach
Hope this little dream isn’t too far out of reach

But anything is possible in my sleepy head
I’m off to relax and dream now in my comfy bed

Jan Allison
10th July 2014

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Ana Espinola Collins July 15, 2014 at 7:36 PM You've written a great flowing poem under circumstances. Stay strong and keep writing to keep you sane :) Ana Jan Allison July 15, 2014 at 7:47 PM I am remaining strong and surprising sane starting to write poetry and joining poetry soup has been my salvation! Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Nehls July 14, 2014 at 6:28 AM Hi, Jan. If you are totally alone is this then I know it can be extremely hard. When there is no time left for self it is so hard. Please try to get some help so you can be you for a while. You are in my prayers, my friend.... Robert. Jan Allison July 14, 2014 at 7:20 AM I have my husband to support me but it is very tough going at times and we are so looking forward to a few days break away in August. Thanks for your concern:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome July 10, 2014 at 2:15 PM Jan what you are going through is just what other cares go through, it's so hard work, your on call 24/7. One should never feel guilty, as we are only human and can only take so much, our batteries get drained we need a break. I know of a few people who tell me the same. you need a life too. we love them so we give them our all. I hope you find sometime for yourself a good friend perhaps to share the load what ever. A great write well done. Pete.X. hope writing helps. Jan Allison July 10, 2014 at 2:22 PM Thanks for your kind words Peter yes the carers are unsung heroes with issues in their own lives but give their time to others - am just so looking forward to a break in August Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance July 10, 2014 at 7:45 AM Hugs Jan. we could all use a break when being responsible for someone elses well being, taking care of yourself is equally important. it is so great of you to be supportive and caring, you are such a terrific person. I hope you have a great rest and find some relaxation, many hugs :) Jan Allison July 10, 2014 at 8:52 AM Am on a break for a few days but not till of August ... am counting down the days - had a tough few days mum been in hospital and it's taken its toll. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith July 10, 2014 at 7:18 AM Sweet dreams Jan....later we can have a cocktail or two...hugs Tim Jan Allison July 10, 2014 at 8:51 AM Oh Tim that would be fantastic:-) Hugs Jan xxx