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Today I Dream

Today I dream of fleeting stars Moving through my mind Like whispering spirits of time Waiting anxiously to be mine Today I dream of two pure hearts Beating as one to the spirit of love Flying briskly through the clouds Just like two beautiful doves Today I dream of honest hands Joined together to finally stand Together as one in this great land Today I became your wife and Today you became my husband!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/17/2008 8:51:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:11:00 AM
Excellent loved this congratulations of finding true love Michael torres
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Date: 11/12/2008 2:58:00 AM
Thank you yet again Raul! I appreciate your kind remarks, very much! Janice
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Date: 11/12/2008 1:01:00 AM
Janice, what a lovely ode to love you have written...Raul
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Date: 11/10/2008 6:06:00 PM
I thank you Mickey for stopping by, reading and giving me this wonderful comment. I look forward to reading your work also.
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Date: 11/10/2008 5:42:00 PM
Oh wow Janice, what a beautiful poem of love that is composed so beautifully by you. I applaud you for doing such a fine job and Thank You for sharing a little of yourself and your talent with us all... MPK
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