Janice Scott Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Today I Dream

Today I dream of fleeting stars
Moving through my mind
Like whispering spirits of time
Waiting anxiously to be mine

Today I dream of two pure hearts
Beating as one to the spirit of love
Flying briskly through the clouds
Just like two beautiful doves

Today I dream of honest hands
Joined together to finally stand
Together as one in this great land
Today I became your wife and 
Today you became my husband!

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Ed Coet November 17, 2008 at 8:51 AM I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal

Michael Torres November 12, 2008 at 3:11 AM Excellent loved this congratulations of finding true love Michael torres

Janice Scott November 12, 2008 at 2:58 AM Thank you yet again Raul! I appreciate your kind remarks, very much! Janice

Raul Moreno November 12, 2008 at 1:01 AM Janice, what a lovely ode to love you have written...Raul

Janice Scott November 10, 2008 at 6:06 PM I thank you Mickey for stopping by, reading and giving me this wonderful comment. I look forward to reading your work also.

Mickey Pig Knuckles November 10, 2008 at 5:42 PM Oh wow Janice, what a beautiful poem of love that is composed so beautifully by you. I applaud you for doing such a fine job and Thank You for sharing a little of yourself and your talent with us all... MPK