Shrineetee Kar Poet List

Today I Accomplished

Today I accomplished after a sustained effort
I wanted to set my mind free of all its dirt
I got rid of all,  that's redundant
The baggage of experience that's abundant

Anger, hate, envy and jealousy
Myths, confusion, illusion and fallacy
Laxity, mess, incoherence and insanity
Chaos, clutter, dishevel and obscurity
Dogmas, tenets, maxims and rules
Traditions and conventions that the present ridicules

Desire, ambition, hunger and greed
I removed all that I didn't need
Only to realise now, there ain't left anything
My anxiety to set it free meant there's nothing.

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Poet Destroyer A May 24, 2015 at 3:41 PM Shrineetee:) Congratulations, on your sweet win. Love LINDA Shrineetee Kar May 25, 2015 at 12:13 AM Thanks for sending these wishes my way.

Skat A May 21, 2015 at 7:03 PM Shrineetee, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT* Shrineetee Kar May 22, 2015 at 12:04 AM Thanks a lot. Nice of you to send the wishes my way....

Jan Allison May 21, 2015 at 12:35 PM I like your take on the theme - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Shrineetee Kar May 22, 2015 at 12:06 AM Thank you. Nice of you to wish me on the win.

Sara Kendrick May 21, 2015 at 12:31 PM I really like the way you went with your entry..If only, I could remove all the bad in one day and it stay gone..Congrats..Sara Shrineetee Kar May 22, 2015 at 12:07 AM Thanks. Sincerely, if only I could .........