Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

Today and Everyday Virelai

Enjoy every day!
Life is meant that way,
rejoice!
Whatever they say,
Just work, rest or play-
our choice
Just take time to pray,
Let God’s Spirit stay,
no noise.

Listen to God’s voice,
Do His will; spread joys,
we should! 
Be calmed as turquoise 
Bright, nice thought employs
right mood;
Stay free from decoys,
Deal tough things with poise,
exude!

Work as brotherhood,
Throw prides at deep wood
today; 
Be always nice…brood
Stored words for brain’s food-
display!
Be honest, be good,
Wear Christ’s Peace as hood
Okay? 



April 2,2023    1.44pm





Brood-  think deeply about something that makes one unhappy

 
-just a try of this amazing form

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Victor Buhagiar April 3, 2023 at 2:21 AM A new form of poetry.which I cannot compose. You did well. Len Gasun April 7, 2023 at 7:52 AM Yes my dear poet friend. It looked like a nice form so I tried, hope i did it right. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Have a Blessed Holy Week to you and your loved ones.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2023 at 4:12 PM Great message in your poem. Good for you trying it. I found it really difficult to do. Len Gasun April 7, 2023 at 7:49 AM Thank you for reading my poem my dear poet friend and for your uplifting words. It's really difficult but it's also a challenge. If it'll not place, it's ok. At least have added to my collection. Have a Blessed Holy Week to you and your family.

Joanna Daniel April 2, 2023 at 2:31 AM Enjoyed! Len Gasun April 7, 2023 at 7:43 AM I'm glad you enjoyed my poem my dear poet friend Jo but I'm not sure if I got the right thing or created a nice piece. Thank you for reading my poem and your uplifting comment. A Blessed Holy Week to you and your family my dear friend, Hugs