Today

Morn's clouds Golden sun rising Which will rule day rain_shine? Either way God is omnipresent Watching
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 27, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Love this Cinquin Sara.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 10:29 PM
Another gem, Sara!!
Sivey Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 9:13 AM
This is a beautiful write, quite beautiful Sara! I really enjoyed the line, "Which will rule day rain_shine?" showing changes that could occur during the day! What fantastic poetry you have written here "Today" my friend! Great Work!!
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May 21, 2012 at 8:00 AM
I have the sun, agian. We need rain, so I know God will send it soon. Thanks for your optimism.
Williams Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:46 AM
Sara, today he is smiling on our part of the UK..David
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