Today

Today, a breath is taken in -
a simple automatic response,
eyelids open -
not even thought about.

Today, a love has been lost -
never to be held again,
the breath stops, the eyelids close -
the responses not simple.

Today, life and love is held much tighter,
never... it seems much closer than it did yesterday -
tomorrow isn't always an automatic response.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Nice arrangement of thought you've done with this.
Amadore Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Indeed....life is a chancy and fragile affair...Seize the day!
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 10:46 AM
George.... bravo, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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