Today

Morning lights the earth
Factories of life at work
Breath for the taking

Horizon afire
Quenched by a watery grave
Night shadows the earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Lovely string with nice images, Randy
Magee-Dittberner Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Yay! That was a great synopsis of the passage of the sun, I hardly think I've seen a better one! Good write =)
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