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In a moment of weakness life can pass you by When you lose grip of reality you must never say goodbye The most precious of moments do await you if you try so let go Of the darkness , let the light in take off and fly…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Andresen Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Welcome Amanda - it is good. OXOX Anne-Lise
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December 18, 2011 at 10:57 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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December 17, 2011 at 4:30 AM
wonderful piece u got here. Welcome to the soupers site. Love to read more from you.'let the light in you, take off and fly. Love, adelaja
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