Toasted

perfect love, joined from above, kind returns to kind, dual thought it brings, same thought she sings, loves subtle connection rhyme, ya toasted Vie, 'perfect love' says I, without a doubt, is sweet... Don

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/20/2012 8:21:00 AM

You are a kind and subtle man, Don! Generous to boot with your compliments and dedications to those around you.:) I hope Vie finds this sweet token! The best part Don, is that you send it up into the air where it may be 'toasted' and appreciated by all!! Best wishes, Mikki

David Williams

Date: 7/19/2012 12:38:00 PM

Don, perfect love, just great ...Dave

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2012 2:43:00 AM

Good morning Don, she is sweet... lovely little poem... always~ PD

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/18/2012 5:15:00 PM

Awesome write my friend! You have completed another incredible poem! Great Work!!