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I'm forever walking
as i said to you before I'm the night walker
by name and by words

for i cant find away out
all i care about is that your OK

i will leave my words wherever i go
one day my heart will stop

my mind may slow but for now my words will forever flow

the eyes will cry
for the heart will break
your mind will shake
the night will fall
the wind will blow

don't you just stop [no stop ] think ??

your cold and alone
the day will break the sun will rise

i told you your tear will dry
look i can see you smile
come on lets dance for a while

is this heaven or just hell.

 for the mind can only tell


                             the nightwalker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/11/2010 9:36:00 PM
Heya Duncan ... first off I want to thank you for all the brilliant comments you left on my poems they are very much appreciated... middle of the day in australia here and my times limited atm ... I will catch up with a few more of yours in my night ... really enjoyed the mystery of this poem thanks again love Jayne
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Date: 10/11/2010 9:19:00 PM
loved this poem!!!
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Date: 10/11/2010 7:09:00 AM
thankxxx Duncan .. appreciate your lovely words on my work today.. this one is pretty awesome a read.. hope u will enter some of the contests posted on site .. a great way to get your poetry read more frequently luv...
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:33:00 PM
yes mysterious
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Date: 10/10/2010 1:25:00 PM
You have an interesting and mysterious way with your poetry! Keeps us guessing....skillfully! :)
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