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I'm forever walking as i said to you before I'm the night walker by name and by words for i cant find away out all i care about is that your OK i will leave my words wherever i go one day my heart will stop my mind may slow but for now my words will forever flow the eyes will cry for the heart will break your mind will shake the night will fall the wind will blow don't you just stop [no stop ] think ?? your cold and alone the day will break the sun will rise i told you your tear will dry look i can see you smile come on lets dance for a while is this heaven or just hell. for the mind can only tell the nightwalker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 9:36:00 PM
Heya Duncan ... first off I want to thank you for all the brilliant comments you left on my poems they are very much appreciated... middle of the day in australia here and my times limited atm ... I will catch up with a few more of yours in my night ... really enjoyed the mystery of this poem thanks again love Jayne
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Date: 10/11/2010 9:19:00 PM
loved this poem!!!
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Date: 10/11/2010 7:09:00 AM
thankxxx Duncan .. appreciate your lovely words on my work today.. this one is pretty awesome a read.. hope u will enter some of the contests posted on site .. a great way to get your poetry read more frequently luv...
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:33:00 PM
yes mysterious
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Date: 10/10/2010 1:25:00 PM
You have an interesting and mysterious way with your poetry! Keeps us guessing....skillfully! :)
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