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To Write A Wrong

I come here when I’m in despair And don’t know what to do. I can’t get over all the pain And grief of losing you. There seems that there is little now That I can say or do I’ll just take up my only weapon And point it straight at you. With one or two creative strokes I’ll do what need be done I’ll rid my soul of memories That tell me you are gone. I’ll find solace in your absence And to myself be true. And when I lay this pen down. I’ll be over losing you. Written by John Posey 3/23/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 11:53:00 AM
This sounds exactly like what I do! I believe that writing poetry can be very therapeutic, it has sure helped me get through some tough times. I loved this poem, and I loved the flow of the words with the rhymes. Very well done!...Would you give me your opinion on one of my new poems? It is titled, "Passionate". Thank you!
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Date: 8/19/2013 6:48:00 AM
I love how simple and straight forward the piece is and also great use of rhyme. I enjoy a universal sentiment and a mutual human experience that connects us all together. Well done; kudos :)
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Date: 8/19/2013 6:49:00 AM
Shoot, forgot to mention that I LOVE the title, also ;)
Date: 6/4/2013 6:20:00 PM
Such a sad thing. I am sorry for your loss. Happy for you to be able to express and that you come here and share. I see you have many friends.
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Date: 6/4/2013 6:30:00 PM
Thanks for the kudos, Debbie. This one was strictly fictional... I'm sure, though, that it fit many circumstances... Jake
Date: 4/24/2013 8:22:00 PM
John, Congratulations in Carol's awesome "WHO WHAT WHERE" ~Goodnight~ Linda
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Date: 4/25/2013 6:51:00 AM
Thanks, Linda.... I am honored..... Jake
Date: 4/24/2013 5:19:00 AM
many congratulations Jake xx
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:56:00 PM
Mandy, thank you so much for your comments... Hugs to ya... Jake
Date: 4/23/2013 9:48:00 PM
In black and white it does shed new light...congratulations...
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:55:00 PM
Donna, you always show up with kudos.... and they are much appreciated.... Love ya.... Jake
Date: 4/23/2013 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, loved reading it, although it is very sad and real. Love Terry
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thanks, Terry, I can always count on an encouraging word from on of the best poets on this site.... Jake
Date: 4/4/2013 4:27:00 PM
Very nicely done
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Date: 4/4/2013 6:53:00 PM
Gwen, I can always seem to find something to write about.... Thanks for reading.... Jake
Date: 3/28/2013 4:19:00 AM
You have done this so well John, it does sometimes help writing things down xx
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Date: 3/28/2013 4:44:00 AM
Mandy, your comments always help so much.... Love you dearly...... Jake
Date: 3/24/2013 3:59:00 AM
Therapy, Jake! Penning the words can disrobe our feelings and allow them to run free, very liberating. Enjoyed this :)
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Date: 3/23/2013 4:43:00 PM
Nice job John..and writing helps in all kind of weathers....Donna
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Date: 3/23/2013 6:05:00 PM
So true Donna. Writing brings peace in troubled times..... Thanks for the visit
Date: 3/23/2013 2:06:00 PM
So sad John, I hope it's "just" a poem. - Well written - Have a great weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2013 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Anne. Don't fret. This is the result of some creative juices sparked by Carol's contest, "Who, What, Where......."..... Jake