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To wisps of straw, we cling in hope A tragicomic tale We are free, yet needlessly grope Chasing illusions stale There’s no need to be meek Know we are strong, not weak We are That, who we seek Why bend in awe To wisps of straw 09-December-2021 Quietus

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Date: 12/9/2021 12:37:00 PM
Your whole poem is a delightful image, full of good advice. "We are That, who we seek."
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Date: 12/9/2021 6:17:00 PM
And when we know it, we are free!

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