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To Wind: Thoughts of Rain

I close my hazel changing eyes, and wait to see yours there, remember when we use to meet, beneath the stars sweet stare, rain could fill our loving eyes, for our bitter-sweet tragedy, and wind would sweep our begging lips, a kiss from you to me... within my hand i hold a rose, colored red by my blood, in waiting here for you to come close, the thorns have pierced my skin with love, ill hold it still, till i can stand, and place it in your palm, and show you that i've waited, ive been waiting all along... Though our distance is too great, to walk and meet half way, ill close my eyes and meet you in my dreams, for we swore we'd meet one day, with crimson colored roses, and bloodied broken hearts, held together by the thorns, that say we'll never part... Hello my love, i whisper, and the words come down in the rain, you mumble in your sleep, hello my love, and again, the wind carries your words to me, and brush my tender lips, though here ill sleep forever, and await your bitter kiss... James my darling, our pain it grew as one, and though we both have others, you will always have my love, my vampire lover, meet me once more in my dreams, and we shall share a blood-lusted kiss, while sufficing others screams... Wind will you listen, as the rain sings our song, my love burns like the fire, but my hate cried all along, my hate is like the fire, that burns outside my soul, by my love for you is raindrops, that fall from skies of gold... the wind will carry to me, your response to my lips, ill wait for you calmly, till you can answer this, will you remember me always? or will i just be a fragment of a memory in your mind? will i always be someone special, or just another fun time? Darling remember, those first words that we wrote, the love that grew between us, never had the need to be spoke...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2010 9:38:00 AM
yet another beautiful write! love how this one flowed too and the images you used here are very striking--very very nice!
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Date: 5/27/2010 10:34:00 PM
a great feeling arises when I read this for I remembered feeling this way for someone. beautifuly penned. -Victorias
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:39:00 PM
ILY!!!!!!!!! there needs to be a 7 million on the rating chart. I love you foreverrrXXXXXXXXXX
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Date: 5/26/2010 6:59:00 PM
It's very romantic and passionate poem with nice images
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Date: 5/26/2010 1:17:00 PM
lovely Rain, romantic in a far distance way, love the lust and desire you and your friend share. Enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:12:00 AM
Beautifully written! I especially like the line about the way the words "come down in the rain." I'm hoping that rainbows will follow you, dear. Best wishes, Carolyn
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