To Whom?

To whom this may concern,
Which means this goes unread,
Unless one of sympathetic nature,
Takes to heart what is said,
And truth be told here today,
That this man's heart broke once again,
Yet both love and hate reside in him,
Against this hypocrite world we live in,
Why do we strive towards what we can't achieve?
Only maybe to be recognized after death,
Creating religions on the grounds of hope, 
Still not knowing when we pass what's left,
Why can't we accept this, why must we grow?
Only to poison our air, sea, and land,
Slaughtering beauty in our lifetime,
Which is too short for our any 'good' man,
Why judge one another for any reason,
Being the epitome of you reap what you sow,
Inevitably lighting the fuse to treason,
Going off what a few big wigs know,
Who's to say they are in any way right?
Controlling our lives with a push of a button,
Only like us, to give in to the same white light,
And back to the beginning of life,
Nothing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/11/2009 9:33:00 AM
A sincere honest write Mac. Congratulations on you poem being featured this week. God BLess
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Date: 3/11/2009 9:13:00 AM
Congrats Mac, on "To Whom?" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured. You stir up some deep thoughts in the readers soul as you pour out your heart in this piece. Very insightful and somewhat sad as well. I truly enjoyed the boldness and honesty of this write. We should all be concerned. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/9/2009 3:37:00 PM
Profound writing here, Mac and I look forward to reading more of your posts here at the Soup! This is just excellent and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:31:00 PM
I really love your wording in this poem.
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:17:00 PM
congrats...I learned I was featured today and many poets wrote me to congraululate me...I thought it was so sweet..sfo I am doing it too. Liked your poem, sure is true about being reconginzed after death..
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Date: 3/9/2009 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem well done! Laura :)
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:28:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder here. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 3/9/2009 10:50:00 AM
Mac - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:00:00 AM
Very deep and thought-provoking writing, I really liked it. Congrats on your feature this week! Amy :)
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Date: 3/8/2009 10:19:00 PM
Hey Mac how are doing bro - shoot me a kite - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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