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To the Young People Who Share My House

I will conjecture And give you a lecture Is it better to complain? Or preferably explain? Should I talk you through it? Or just tell you to do it? If you listened first time round Ranting words won't compound I give you a tongue lashing A noisy ear bashing But you still don't hear me say "JUST PUT IT AWAY" So do it right first And your bubble I won't burst And I will not conjecture Or give you a lecture. PLEASE

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Date: 11/4/2023 3:30:00 PM
Nice penning Aly, with good rhyme and flow and nice imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Aly Bahr
Date: 11/4/2023 5:37:00 PM
Thank you kindly Gordon.
Date: 10/20/2023 1:08:00 AM
Hahaha, sorry for the pain we cause you XD - Phoenix :)
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Date: 10/20/2023 3:58:00 AM
All good if you just do it! ;)
Date: 10/19/2023 9:33:00 AM
My mother would love this. As an adult living with parents, this never changes. And no, I still won't remember. Lovely poem.
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Date: 10/19/2023 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Brittany. I hope you show your mother! ;)

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