Aly Bahr Poet Rhyme

To the Young People Who Share My House

I will conjecture
And give you a lecture
Is it better to complain?
Or preferably explain?

Should I talk you through it?
Or just tell you to do it?
If you listened first time round
Ranting words won't compound

I give you a tongue lashing
A noisy ear bashing
But you still don't hear me say
"JUST PUT IT AWAY"

So do it right first
And your bubble I won't burst
And I will not conjecture
Or give you a lecture.

PLEASE

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Gordon Mcconnell November 4, 2023 at 3:30 PM Nice penning Aly, with good rhyme and flow and nice imagery too. Blessings,Gordon Aly Bahr November 4, 2023 at 5:37 PM Thank you kindly Gordon.

Fire Bird October 20, 2023 at 1:08 AM Hahaha, sorry for the pain we cause you XD - Phoenix :) Aly Bahr October 20, 2023 at 3:58 AM All good if you just do it! ;)

Brittany Starks October 19, 2023 at 9:33 AM My mother would love this. As an adult living with parents, this never changes. And no, I still won't remember. Lovely poem. Aly Bahr October 19, 2023 at 12:04 PM Thank you Brittany. I hope you show your mother! ;)