To the Members So Kind

I sit here in amazement
They say they heard my words
I don’t see how that’s possible.
With the thunder of the herds
Does it mean there are some people?
Who see beyond the box
Hear above the barrage of eternal banal talk
The seed of joy sprouting
The silence of joyful shouting
Perhaps I’ll part the curtain
See if it be night or day
Consider opening the door 
Yes I guess that I should say
Thank you, to the people’s  comments
May that be good enough?
Communication is not easy
Fact is, it is quite tough
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ruebel Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Hello Gregory, I just looked in on you and I am so glad I did. This is great! Keep the flow going. Have a wonderful weekend As Always, Shar
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace