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To Set One's Feet Upon the Trail

To set one's feet upon the trail, to briefly put one's life on hold, suspending what that might entail, is to relax, unfurl, unfold. To set one's feet upon fresh, loamy dirt, observe the night give break to dawn, arouse forgotten nerves… To set one's feet firm on the earth embrace complete creation's worth… To set out wrong, to fail is sure, if one forgets to set one's feet upon the trail… ---------- A Zanze: 8A:8b:8a:8b:6c:6d:6c:6d:4e:4f:4e:4f:2g:4a:6g:8A with the additional requirement that L5 is the first 6 of L1, L9 is the first 4 of L1, and L13 is the first 2 of L1. Tricky!

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Date: 1/28/2023 9:15:00 PM
Great message in an amazing form, Jeff. A reminder I really needed (even if the trail is temporarily snowed under). Thanks, Gershon
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