To Set Free

She thought of him constantly
Had seen his descent into insobriety
It had been encouraged actually 
A familiar practice in her family
Since the boys were still in puberty
It had put his life in jeopardy
For he had fallen prey to its misery.

Her brother became an alcoholic
She tried to help him kick that habit
He would always fall back into the grip
Of this vicious beast that finally got him sick.
And that night, she had been upset with him
Had said words she regretted to have said to him
For those words had become a reality.

Now she couldn't stop the tears from running
And her family had shunned her out, blaming
All her efforts to help her brother had failed
But it was the alcohol that had put the nail
into his coffin, but would death liberate him?
She had to set him free, free from her sadness
She did all she could; he had failed himself.

By CarolineCecile
Copyright © 05.18.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/13/2010 5:57:00 PM
no one can help an addict.
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Date: 5/22/2010 9:20:00 AM
Wow, Caroline! Das geht tief ins Gemüt!!! Alcohol could be sweet but also a real devil! So pretty well written! Und danke für Deine Kommentare....Liebe Grüße, Gert
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:40:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Caroline. A wise down to earth write. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 3:02:00 AM
well done, Caroline, like the deepness you share with us here,..p.d.
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Date: 5/19/2010 12:51:00 AM
Wow Caroline, what a reality check for people still in denial about the effects this addiction has on the person and those who love them.. - regards Wilma
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:29:00 PM
To love someone who cannot love themselves it one of the hardest places to be - This is a great poem; you did an excellent job- All the best, Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 9:08:00 PM
Wow. Have watched similar tales unfold. You did an excellent job in putting this trauma, heartache and second guessing in words. Something that I think people who have lived this should read. Joe
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:28:00 PM
STRONG WRITE, MUCH ENJOYED
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