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To Save

" To Save "

She followed her little puppy
into the middle of the street
a truck was speeding down the road
I quickly swept her off her feet.

I felt the truck run into me
it sent me up to meet our lord
I saved that young girls precious life
and going to heaven is my reward.

There is no hate nor crime up here
we all love one another
I see the girl whose life I saved
just become a beautiful mother.

I know my loved ones grieved and mourned
that day they learned I was gone
I had To Save that little girl
so her young life could go on...

Penned By MPK

NOTE: This Poem Was Inspired By A Real Situation...

Copyright © Mickey Pig Knuckles | Year Posted 2008

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Carrie Richards Date: 7/12/2008 8:29:00 AM Thank you Mickey, for your kind words. Your heart comes through all the beautiful words that you express through poetry. How lucky that we have this avenue to tell others what we know and feel. This poem tells a gem of a story. Login to Reply

Teresa Harr-Pena Date: 7/12/2008 7:10:00 AM Hey Mickey...It's inspiring to know that someone cares enough to let the young live a full life. In the end someone else gets eternal life. Almost brought tears to my eyes. Login to Reply

Christy Hardy Date: 7/12/2008 4:45:00 AM As I read your words, I could feel your warmness. Through the words of another, a door is opened that allows the reader to take a peek at that persons soul, I see a kind, loving person, thank you for all your kind comments on my work, Always, Christy Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 7/12/2008 2:02:00 AM Mickey - I thank you for your kind words and I feel the same - This poem had excellent flow, rhyme and message - outstanding poetry - Login to Reply