Home » Poems » Mickey Pig Knuckles » To Save

To Save

" To Save " She followed her little puppy into the middle of the street a truck was speeding down the road I quickly swept her off her feet. I felt the truck run into me it sent me up to meet our lord I saved that young girls precious life and going to heaven is my reward. There is no hate nor crime up here we all love one another I see the girl whose life I saved just become a beautiful mother. I know my loved ones grieved and mourned that day they learned I was gone I had To Save that little girl so her young life could go on... Penned By MPK NOTE: This Poem Was Inspired By A Real Situation...

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/12/2008 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Mickey, for your kind words. Your heart comes through all the beautiful words that you express through poetry. How lucky that we have this avenue to tell others what we know and feel. This poem tells a gem of a story.

Teresa Harr-Pena

Date: 7/12/2008 7:10:00 AM

Hey Mickey...It's inspiring to know that someone cares enough to let the young live a full life. In the end someone else gets eternal life. Almost brought tears to my eyes.

Christy Hardy

Date: 7/12/2008 4:45:00 AM

As I read your words, I could feel your warmness. Through the words of another, a door is opened that allows the reader to take a peek at that persons soul, I see a kind, loving person, thank you for all your kind comments on my work, Always, Christy

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/12/2008 2:02:00 AM

Mickey - I thank you for your kind words and I feel the same - This poem had excellent flow, rhyme and message - outstanding poetry -