Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

To Ruben

To Ruben:

I'm new here and you don't know me.
I'm still learning where things are at...
You make me laugh! You're so funny!
I just wanted you to know that.
Do you like horses? Ride? I do.
I ride after school. Want to come?
If you don't know how, I'll teach you.
I have my own...they're lots of fun!
Don't worry if there's call for rain,
We can ride them down by the sea.
You want to go ? The bell just  rang!
Please answer this before you leave.
     ___                      ___
     |__|                     |__|  
     YES                       NO



©deborah burch
4/04/2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 1:26 PM Congrats on your win, Deb! Your love note is adorable. I love the boxes. Way to go!! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 11:39 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Passing A Love Note" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 15, 2012 at 1:00 AM Congrautlations Deb I love the tick box aspect on this, well done a lovely verse xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 9:33 AM congrats Deborah on a wonderful win for this sweet write .. so enjoyed luv.. soup mail..

Michael J. Falotico April 14, 2012 at 7:54 AM Very nice Deborah.... congrats on your win!! luv Michael Deborah Burch April 14, 2012 at 8:17 AM Thank you for a fun contest and my win :) I was a late bloomer so I didn't write love notes then...plus my mother would have killed me!! big huggss,love deb

Deborah Burch April 10, 2012 at 4:43 AM LOL...thank you so much Charma...LOL...Thank you for this early morning laugh :D ...Big huggss my friend,love deb

Charmaine Chircop April 10, 2012 at 4:07 AM Lovely love mote Miss Burch... :) .. take Ruben anywhere but not by the sea dear :)..Horse riding is a great idea though.. Lovely creative poem Deborah...Charma Deborah Burch April 10, 2012 at 4:47 AM LOL...thank you so much Charma...I'm still giggling...you have a beautiful day my friend...big huggsss,love deb

Black Eyed Susan April 7, 2012 at 12:26 PM Ha! Cute poem for the contest! One of the best I've read! FYI, you've been bitten! See Linda's contest :) Deborah Burch April 10, 2012 at 4:45 AM lol...thank you Cuz...:D big huggss,love deb

Roman Chebukin April 5, 2012 at 2:56 AM very cute. loved it. i got the biggest smile on my face right now. very cute. :))))))) Roman. Deborah Burch April 10, 2012 at 4:44 AM :) Thank you so much dear, big huggsss, deb