To Ruben

To Ruben: I'm new here and you don't know me. I'm still learning where things are at... You make me laugh! You're so funny! I just wanted you to know that. Do you like horses? Ride? I do. I ride after school. Want to come? If you don't know how, I'll teach you. I have my own...they're lots of fun! Don't worry if there's call for rain, We can ride them down by the sea. You want to go ? The bell just rang! Please answer this before you leave. ___ ___ |__| |__| YES NO ©deborah burch 4/04/2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/16/2012 1:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Deb! Your love note is adorable. I love the boxes. Way to go!! Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Passing A Love Note" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/15/2012 1:00:00 AM

Congrautlations Deb I love the tick box aspect on this, well done a lovely verse xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/14/2012 9:33:00 AM

congrats Deborah on a wonderful win for this sweet write .. so enjoyed luv.. soup mail..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/14/2012 7:54:00 AM

Very nice Deborah.... congrats on your win!! luv Michael

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/14/2012 8:17:00 AM

Thank you for a fun contest and my win :) I was a late bloomer so I didn't write love notes then...plus my mother would have killed me!! big huggss,love deb

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/10/2012 4:43:00 AM

LOL...thank you so much Charma...LOL...Thank you for this early morning laugh :D ...Big huggss my friend,love deb

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/10/2012 4:07:00 AM

Lovely love mote Miss Burch... :) .. take Ruben anywhere but not by the sea dear :)..Horse riding is a great idea though.. Lovely creative poem Deborah...Charma

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 4:47:00 AM

LOL...thank you so much Charma...I'm still giggling...you have a beautiful day my friend...big huggsss,love deb

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/7/2012 12:26:00 PM

Ha! Cute poem for the contest! One of the best I've read! FYI, you've been bitten! See Linda's contest :)

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 4:45:00 AM

lol...thank you Cuz...:D big huggss,love deb

Roman Chebukin

Date: 4/5/2012 2:56:00 AM

very cute. loved it. i got the biggest smile on my face right now. very cute. :))))))) Roman.

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 4:44:00 AM

:) Thank you so much dear, big huggsss, deb