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To My Son Jared

T o many days I have missed you O oldest Son of my loins, M ayhap some day to write together again Y earning for the Joy S on you were my first born child O only now you are the oldest, N ever did you not make my heart smile J ared A lways R emember E vermore I shall be, Your Loving D ad Merry Christmas from Iowa Son.... I Love You.....Dad

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/5/2009 4:42:00 PM

sweetly penned, sounds like you did a fine job with your son! enjoyed reading!

Marty Owens

Date: 12/3/2009 7:41:00 PM

Oh this is so beautiful...Wow...love it...Marty

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/3/2009 12:22:00 PM

nice tribute to a loving son. john and welcome

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/3/2009 11:19:00 AM

A beautiful tribute to Jar...another of your splendid writes my love!! Keep them coming! Love You! ~Mary

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/3/2009 10:44:00 AM

So nice! Perfect acrostic and a great tribute to your oldest son. Thank you for sharing, Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/3/2009 10:19:00 AM

Jared is a poet ,a friend ,an entertainer and much more,he is very talented,He is a piece of sage in our soup and from what im reading he takes after you..lovely tribute indeed..=Charma

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 12/3/2009 10:16:00 AM

I like this in that it is simple and yet movig on the most basic level. Thank you for your comments on my little piece. It means a lot to me. Regards, Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/3/2009 9:36:00 AM

Such beautiful sentiment here, Richard,.. I know... I have four sons (3 living) and they are the reason for life itself... astounding tribute to a wonderful guy who is my dearest friend on the Soup... thankxxx for sharing... and for your nice comments on my poetry today... happy u enjoyed... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie.."Sweetie" what does Taz stand for?

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 9:00:00 AM

This is the third dedication for me today..... Thank you pop.... I loved it and am making this a fav......Great write.....:JP].........Oh, you should read Linda-Marie-Barianas poem called "Lone Wolf".....