To My Son, Ashton

Alone with you before you breathed, I faced the world in fear,
but every kick beneath my ribs said, Mommy, I am here.

He walked away from both of us, a choice he can't undo,
so I became the strength he lacked and poured it into you.

Now sixteen years have carved you into someone brave and true,
a man who proves that love can build what absence never knew.

Your father left an empty space he never tried to fill,
but you became the man who rose from all that he left still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Williams Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 8:15 PM
Very well put. Congratulations on your top-ten win with this introspective piece! Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
Daniels Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 1:20 AM
Lovely strong rhymes poem, Singled Out ! Your positivity & sense of responsibility shines through. Well done in Contest. Keep writing & entering. Sending blessings., Ghairo.
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May 19, 2026 at 6:53 PM
Thank you so much, Ghairo. Your kind words truly mean a lot to me. I'm grateful for the encouragement and honored to have placed in your contest. Blessings to you as well.
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 1:19 PM
This one is powerful. Love it. Congrats for your win
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May 19, 2026 at 6:55 PM
Thank you so much, I truly appreciate that. I'm grateful the poem resonated with you, and I'm honored by the win.
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