To My Sister On Her Wedding Day

I opened my eyes and you were there
I cried for the first time, you still were
I looked up at you as I crawled on the floor
So happy you were, running through the door
I stood up on my feet and followed your footsteps
Innocently smiling, you watched as I made my first steps
We both grew older and started the fights
Still we’d play and laugh on hot summer nights
And on dark freezing winter days,
I’d fall asleep in your warm embrace

A real best friend I’ve found in you
Like a mother’s love; so sweet, so true
How lucky I was, life seemed so fair
Smothered with tremendous love and care
You taught me how love can be unconditional
You showed me such love was real, not fictional
You showed me how in two bodies one soul can dwell
And what it meant to be a sister’s protective shell
Sharing my life with you has been a great pleasure
Our sisterhood will remain my truly greatest treasure

You’ve now become a beautiful bride
And I look at you with indescribable pride
I wish you a lifetime full of love and delight
I wish to always see your smile shining so bright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/25/2024 2:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/15/2016 3:30:00 PM
sarah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2015 1:34:00 AM
good write. SK
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Date: 9/15/2013 5:19:00 AM
thank you for sharing such a wonderful write
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Date: 11/13/2010 8:56:00 AM
it is a well woven poetry,so subtle
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:42:00 AM
awww... having a sisters is the best. they'll be with you through thick and thin.. thanks for dropping by and reading one of my poems. i really appreciate it. :) Lizann
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:31:00 AM
Thank you guys. I, unfortunately, have no sister. A friend just asked me to write her something for her sister's wedding :)
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:07:00 PM
Such a heartfelt and enjoyable write. I enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:01:00 PM
enjoyed--reminds me of my sister
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:30:00 PM
A pleasant feeling you share with us. I just finish visiting my sister who lives far from me. This is good to remind me we once use to be best friends to. Enjoyed. thank you.
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