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To My Sister On Her Wedding Day

I opened my eyes and you were there I cried for the first time, you still were I looked up at you as I crawled on the floor So happy you were, running through the door I stood up on my feet and followed your footsteps Innocently smiling, you watched as I made my first steps We both grew older and started the fights Still we’d play and laugh on hot summer nights And on dark freezing winter days, I’d fall asleep in your warm embrace A real best friend I’ve found in you Like a mother’s love; so sweet, so true How lucky I was, life seemed so fair Smothered with tremendous love and care You taught me how love can be unconditional You showed me such love was real, not fictional You showed me how in two bodies one soul can dwell And what it meant to be a sister’s protective shell Sharing my life with you has been a great pleasure Our sisterhood will remain my truly greatest treasure You’ve now become a beautiful bride And I look at you with indescribable pride I wish you a lifetime full of love and delight I wish to always see your smile shining so bright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/15/2016 3:30:00 PM
sarah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2015 1:34:00 AM
good write. SK
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Date: 9/15/2013 5:19:00 AM
thank you for sharing such a wonderful write
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Date: 11/13/2010 8:56:00 AM
it is a well woven poetry,so subtle
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:42:00 AM
awww... having a sisters is the best. they'll be with you through thick and thin.. thanks for dropping by and reading one of my poems. i really appreciate it. :) Lizann
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:31:00 AM
Thank you guys. I, unfortunately, have no sister. A friend just asked me to write her something for her sister's wedding :)
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:07:00 PM
Such a heartfelt and enjoyable write. I enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:01:00 PM
enjoyed--reminds me of my sister
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:30:00 PM
A pleasant feeling you share with us. I just finish visiting my sister who lives far from me. This is good to remind me we once use to be best friends to. Enjoyed. thank you.
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