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To My Lover

This place reminds me As you were watching me first time. I opened my mouth to tell you "I am fine". I remember the lights turning Into blurs of blazing fire When your hand went tight Around mine. You feel my heart is beating and i can barely breath 'cause your hand is still gripping mine it's all was just a deception you left my soul in distruption and the evil's only by my side. Love's gone, it shows it's dark sides. Red, blue, green colours of my life Are all back, but turned black in a time Love's gone, no fire....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/4/2019 11:18:00 AM
A lovely poem, the promise and excitement shines through in the beginning and then it all ends so hopelessly . Well done
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Date: 6/30/2019 10:54:00 PM
beautifully expressed- You feel my heart is beating/ and i can barely breath 'cause/ your hand is still gripping mine///thanks for sharing
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Date: 6/30/2019 2:57:00 PM
I think it is fairly common to feel conned unfortunately when love breaks down, you captured the mood of the emotion extremely well in your poem I felt, Rachel
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