To My Love

To whisper these words on valentines 
I wrote this from my purest side 
To the lady whom dressed to the nines 

I did struggle to write these lines 
It would take me on a happy joyride 
To whisper these words on valentines 

I love to watch how the hair shines 
As the sun sends rays from outside   
To the lady whom dressed to the nines 

Pages are made from the fibers of Pines 
Quill weaves as my fingers guide 
To whisper these words on valentines 

Let me buy the richest wines 
Lit up some candles on the bedside 
To the lady whom dressed to the nines 

You are beautiful more than my poem defines 
My inner butterflies have been multiplied 
To whisper these words on valentines 
To the lady whom dressed to the nines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 11:25 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 1:37 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Victor :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 12, 2016 at 10:17 PM
Victor, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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March 7, 2016 at 6:06 AM
Victor , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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